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OctPoWriMo Day 19

Hello poetry lovers,

It is a grey sky
it carries on throughout the week
the air feels chill
feels damp

The rain falls
a drizzle
sounds like tapping on my window
it gets heavier
sounds like someone left the faucet on

The sun shines the most bright after rain
after hiding behind the clouds
besides a rainbow
once it rises

The raindrops
on the flowers, leaves and grass
a beauty only sharp eyes see

those are the best moments
when you can see shadows
and know they will leave.

Love, Fida

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Unknown said…
This is good. I can picture it all as I read it.

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October 19, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Anonymous said…
Very vivid. Great job.
October 19, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Tamara Woods said…
Loved the description here.
October 20, 2014 at 4:48 AM
Michelle Liew said…
Well-crafted imagery!
October 20, 2014 at 9:30 AM
payal agarwal said…
beautiful imagery. :)
October 21, 2014 at 2:37 PM
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