Poem - Notice

Hello Poetteers,

I think it's time we stop
and watch the children
I think it's time we stop
acting like children

Notice the sounds
of their happiness
we should have that heart in us

Notice the sound
of their immaturity
try and stay in a level that is appreciated
one where you will be respected

For what it is worth
just look around and see
what is going down.

(8:50 am Apr 8, 15)

Love, Fida
#A to Z Poetry


Tara Tyler said…
so true, so true
be a kid at heart - but be responsible too!
Haneen Ibrahim said…
Strong poem,the opening is perfect. I can't agree more on the message in it.
"Haneen/I Will Never Give you Up (430)"