Review of UNBREATHABLE

Hello readers,

UNBREATHABLE by Hafsah Laziaf might be out a little early!! Following is a random poem I wrote, but I don't know if it goes with the story:

Just beginning

staring, smiling

waiting for the sun

but the clouds and rain come in

you upset me

I'm unwritten, unbreathable

I'll let my skin feel the rain

I'll still be unwritten, but now breathable.

Review

Right as I finished reading it I wanted to reread it. From the beginning of the story you are already captivated by the big and little things that are happening. I love the voice! It's poetic.

I came to this realization early in the story, so you probably know how I feel through out the rest of it.

Of course there are some surprises. I like the complexity of a love triangle, I may not understand everything, but that's what I love about it. It's beautiful nonetheless. I cried a couple times. Awesome writing does that!

Thanks & Love,

Comments

SN Taylor said…

This sounds like an interesting book. Where can I find it?

October 29, 2013 at 8:36 PM

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