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Poetry Schmoetry: Silence

Assalamu Alaikum sisters,


I'm entering my first blog fest ever! Also, it's a poetry one! The blog fest is called Poetry Schmoetry. My first entry was Monday's poem, today is the second entry, and i'A tomorrow will be the third and last. So enjoy!

Silence

Silence is all I need
after all this
rushing here and there
everyone is piling work on my
I take it as stress
overflowing my frustration level
I want to rest, I want to cry
I know nothing will stop, stay still

But all I need silence
to brighten me up.

thank you,
Fida
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Angela Cothran said…
AMEN! I loved your poem. It perfectly captured the feeling. I need silence too. Not in a "silence would be nice" way, but a "I need silence like I need air" way. Maybe that is why I'm a night owl.
July 13, 2011 at 2:41 PM
Fida Islaih said…
Welcome to my blog Angie! I'm glad you love the poem! (:
July 13, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Pam Williams said…
I understand that feeling completely! Silence can be so elusive these days. Glad you joined the blogfest!
Blessings!
Pam at www.2encourage.com
July 13, 2011 at 3:17 PM
Unknown said…
I love this! At night, I feel this way. The dark and the silence can be so comforting sometimes!
July 13, 2011 at 3:32 PM
Fida Islaih said…
Welcome to my blog ladies! Do enjoy each poem!

@Pam: I'm glad to have joined. And I'm glad you love the poem.

@Nisa: Yup, it is comforting. Glad you love the poem.

Blessings to you both,
Fida (:
July 13, 2011 at 3:38 PM
Unknown said…
MashAllah, as always dear baji :) You've been awarded with the butterfly award on my blog!! :)

http://thecreativemuslimah.blogspot.com/2011/07/butterfly-award.html

fiamanAllah

The Creative Muslimah
July 13, 2011 at 5:40 PM
Dawn M. Hamsher said…
Oh yes! I need my silence sometimes too.

The Write Soil
July 13, 2011 at 5:59 PM
Brianna said…
After a weekend of house guests and parties, I can totally relate with needing silence!

Thanks for stopping by my blog and reading my shmoetry!
July 13, 2011 at 6:20 PM
Fida Islaih said…
@CreativeMuslimah: aww... thanks! Be sure to check out tomorrow's post!

@Dawn: Glad you agree!

@Brianna: Your poem was full of memory and you're welcome!

Fida (:
July 13, 2011 at 6:26 PM
ali cross said…
This was beautiful Fida. I'm off to read your first one . . . so happy you found me, so I could find YOU!
July 13, 2011 at 10:46 PM
Fida Islaih said…
@Ali: Thanks! Yeah, I'm glad I found you, too. Cuz I get to do your blogfest after this one! Non-stop writing, that's the real me (:

Fida (:
July 13, 2011 at 10:52 PM
Randy said…
Sign me up for an extra dose of that. I'm thinking of posting that up near my workspace.
July 15, 2011 at 6:51 AM
Kayeleen Hamblin said…
I've felt this way too. Beautiful.
July 15, 2011 at 2:21 PM
Allison said…
I totally know that feeling.
July 16, 2011 at 2:16 AM
Small Town Shelly Brown said…
OOoo, we've all been there, haven't we?!? I think this was brilliantly said.
July 16, 2011 at 6:49 PM
Fida Islaih said…
@Shelly: I'm glad I could, thanks!
July 16, 2011 at 6:55 PM
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