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Sensations of Space

Hello readers,

In Creative Writing, we had to write a series of 10 short poems. Each of them about 3 lines long & written for 3 minutes. The tricky part we have to write about what our eyes fall on. Here's some of them.

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People

White, brown, tan
All colors of love and peace
People, I love you
All for the sake of God.

People all around me
Some help, some hurt
But we're all here for the sake of God.

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Trashcan

Throw all your worries away
Don't let it hold you down
Cuz baby, I love your smile.

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Tornado

A twister of life
Messing with your mind
Just let the little things pass
And it'll be alright.

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Clock

Tick-tock
time of my life
laugh and smile
All you want.

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Angel Wings

Baby, you're my angel
take me away
to a place where
I can always smile.

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Closet

I find every color
I need to wear
Holding outfits
Of three cultures.

thank you,
Fida
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Ms Saba (aka Teacher007.5) said…
Nice poems sis!!! I loved them all :) but for some reason, the trash can poem took the cake :D
May 5, 2011 at 6:27 PM
Fida Islaih said…
@Saba: Thanks, I'm glad you loved them. I showed the poems to my resource teacher and she said she liked the Trashcan one, too!

Either way, iA we're all happy,
Fida xx
May 5, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Anonymous said…
All are lovely but my favourite would be People!
Have a lovely week-end.
May 6, 2011 at 12:22 PM
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