The Poetteer

Hello Poetteers, We are reaching the last week of 2018. I wanted to share my thoughts on the last few poetry books I’ve read. I love vulnerable poems that share personal experiences. I’m tired of vague poems about love. You’ll see that below. November From 14 to 41 by Suzanne Purewal 3.5 stars Some pieces were sweet and empowering. I love the pieces about nature and can relate to some of the sorrow. Though, the romance isn’t my style. I also enjoyed the imagery in the poems and the illustrations. December Shame Is an Ocean I Swim Across: Poems by Mary Lambert 5 stars This is powerful and heartbreaking as Mary shares personal thoughts and experiences about heavy topics. I appreciate the glimpses of self love. Soft Thorns by bridgett devoue 3. 5 stars This feels like an average collection filled with vague love poems. The pieces that stood out to me are the ones of heartbreak and healing. What are you currently r

Hi Poetteers, You are probably writing a poem or book right now. First and foremost, when you’re done writing take a break and step away from it. Look at it later with fresh eyes. Save the older draft if you want to go back to it. Here are some editing tips. Read your poem aloud. Read it without the first line. Read it without the first stanza. Read your poem without the line or stanza you feel unsure about. Read your poem backwards. Last but not least, get a second/unbiased opinion. Do you want to work with me? Check out my poetry services page and fill out the form. stay inspired, Fida