Behind the Poem: Hold Space

Hello Poetteers,

Original Poem

Always when I talk with you,

I'm afraid to say everything

because I think you might not

understand it all

because of the somewhat

different beliefs we have.

Yet you ask questions to help me.

And I'm glad you do.

We are, together breaking down

another wall of isolation.

Response Poem

I hold back

afraid to say anything

worried you might not understand

because of the different beliefs we have;

you say something

that contradicts my beliefs

and I shrink back

wishing someone else was in place

where I didn’t have to explain the cultural expectations

before expressing how I feel

You are willing to ask questions and learn

it feels tiring

like there’s no space for me.

Behind the Poem

I enjoy sharing my beliefs and values. Sometimes I get tired of having to explain my religious beliefs and cultural values, especially before pouring out my emotions. I wish people were more aware and understanding of different cultures and religions. That right there is why I write poetry: to express my emotions and experiences while spreading cultural awareness. Why do you write?

A to Z Poetry is available for purchase on Smashwords.

stay inspired,
Fida

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