Thursday, October 10, 2013

OctPoWriMo Day 5-11

Hello readers, 

Writing poetry specifically to the prompts was a fail this week. But I still have something for you to enjoy!

Day 8

Love is like...
the ocean washing away
layers and layers of sand
finding out who you are. 

2 comments:

Julie Jordan Scott said...

So beautiful. So BEAUTIFUL! And I wanted to put my two cents in. I don't believe in any kind of poetry being a fail, even undone poetry. Big hugs!

Anna K. Stewart said...

I like this...I have this mental image of a body beneath the sand (living, I'm not trying to be macabre) and slowly taking shape as the water pulls, pulls, pulls...very nice!